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TWILIGHT

TWILIGHT
on the new day twilight
lying down
with the dream interrupted by the last urination
simply
I feel good
numbed in body languor
faded
discounting the minutes left
to get up

///

ao lusco fusco do novo dia
deitado
com o sonho interrompido pela última micção
simplesmente
sinto-me bem
amodorrado no langor do corpo
esvaído
descontando os minutos que faltam
para me levantar

by Armando TABORDA, 2022

Robert Swanson, Jean Pierre Marcello, Frans Schols, aNNa schramm and 12 other people have particularly liked this photo


19 comments - The latest ones
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Paolo Tanino, Nouchetdu38, Stephan Fey, Fred Fouarge, beapixa, homaris, aNNa schramm, and Frans Schols!
16 months ago. Edited 16 months ago.
 Ulrich John
Ulrich John club
Fantastic, Armando !
16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Ulrich John club
Many thanks, John!
16 months ago.
 Annemarie
Annemarie club
beautiful mood
Happy Sunday:)
16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Annemarie club
Many thanks, Annemarie! Kiss!
16 months ago.
 Malik Raoulda
Malik Raoulda club
Une atmosphère de rêve avec un texte correspondant.
Bonne et agréable journée dominicale.
16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Malik Raoulda club
Deux fois merci, Malik! Bon dimanche!
16 months ago.
 vero
vero club
magique Armando très bon dimanche bisous
16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to vero club
Merci, vero! Bisous!
16 months ago.
 cammino
cammino club
Eine geheimnisvolle Aufnahme, passend zum Text.
16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to cammino club
Thanks twice, cammino!
16 months ago.
 Esther
Esther club
A unique approach to the challenge. Well done.
16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Esther club
Well, maybe it's not unique, but at least it's one approach as you said, Esther! Thanks very much!
16 months ago.
 Gillian Everett
Gillian Everett club
A beautiful twilight
16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Gillian Everett club
Thanks much, Gillian!
16 months ago.
 Xata
Xata club
Out of the box thinking Armando, fica a curiosidade sobre o pontinho branco: vela ou gaivota?
Ler o teu poema estando ainda na cama a ver as nuvens coloridas do dia a abrir com fundo sonoro de mar e vento foi o máximo, obrigada !
16 months ago. Edited 16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Xata club
...o pontinho branco é exactamente aquilo que puderes ver no teu sonho, Isabel...

beijo
16 months ago.
 Jean Pierre Marcello
Jean Pierre Marcello club
Gosto muito..a foto e o comentario. Obrigado
16 months ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Jean Pierre Marcello club
Obrigado eu, Jean-Pierre! Um abraço para ti, e um beijo à tua mulher, Isabel!
16 months ago.

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