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BIGGER THAN A HAIKU

BIGGER THAN A HAIKU
today
my wife told me I'm much creative
maybe not
creativity is also created with a bit of originality
a smile
a tear shed on paper
what's needed is to run away from the hearts that drip love
otherwise sonnets
triplets
quartets come out
oh I already forgot
haikus stanzas and verses
trying to perpetuate banalities
false situations
caricatures of life
and death
hopelessly
because everything is ephemeral and has an end
even this original text
full of creativity which
soon after reading
is forgotten

///

MAIOR QUE UM HAIKU

hoje
minha mulher disse-me que estou muito criativo
talvez não
a criatividade também se cria com um pouco de originalidade
um sorriso
uma lágrima vertida no papel
é preciso é fugir dos corações que pingam amor
se não saem sonetos
tercetos
quartetos
ò já esquecia
haikus estrofes e versos
a tentar eternizar banalidades
situações falsas
caricaturas da vida
e da morte
perdidamente
porque tudo é efémero e tem um fim
mesmo este texto original
cheio de cratividade que
após lido
logo se esquece

by Armando TABORDA, 2021

Erika Akire, Annemarie, cammino, Roger (Grisly) and 12 other people have particularly liked this photo


23 comments - The latest ones
 William Sutherland
William Sutherland club
Excellent poem and awesome compo! Stay well!

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4 months ago.
Armando Taborda club
has replied to William Sutherland club
Most grateful, William!
4 months ago.
 Malik Raoulda
Malik Raoulda club
Toujours un plaisir de m'évader avec toi..Merci.
Bonne et agréable fin de semaine.
4 months ago.
Armando Taborda club
has replied to Malik Raoulda club
Toujours un plaisir de voyager avec toi, Malik! Bon week-end!
4 months ago.
 homaris
homaris club
Un sourire pour toi, Armando! Et bon WE!
4 months ago.
Armando Taborda club
has replied to homaris club
Deux sourires pou toi, homaris!
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, goandgo!
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Grato pelo favorito, homaris!
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Ulrich John!
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Je te remercie le fave, Jean-luc Drouin!
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Je te remercie le fave, Vero!
4 months ago.
 J.Garcia
J.Garcia club
Armandinho...Armandinho...muito narcisismo..
4 months ago. Edited 4 months ago.
Armando Taborda club
has replied to J.Garcia club
narciso = indivíduo que admira exageradamente a sua imagem...nunca pensei que isso te passasse pela cabeça, e se não é piada, desculpo-te à mesma, sabes porquê, Judite? porque quer o teu comentário, quer a ninha resposta, "após lidos, logo se esquecem"
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Mariagrazia Gaggero!
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, beapixa!
4 months ago.
 Nouchetdu38
Nouchetdu38 club
Très belle photo dans l'intimité de ton inspiration!
Très beau texte!!!!!!*****
4 months ago.
Armando Taborda club
has replied to Nouchetdu38 club
Je suis ravis de ton commentaire, Nouchet! Merci du coeur!
4 months ago.
 Roger (Grisly)
Roger (Grisly) club
A masterpiece of image and words Armando,
enjoy you weekend.
4 months ago.
Armando Taborda club
has replied to Roger (Grisly) club
I'm very proud of your comment, Roger! Thanks from my heart!
4 months ago.
 cammino
cammino club
I think you wife is right!
4 months ago.
Armando Taborda club
has replied to cammino club
My wife is a good witness, cammino! Thanks much! :)
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Annemarie!
4 months ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Erika Akire!
4 months ago.

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