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DAY TRIPPIN'

DAY TRIPPIN'
We talked all morning about the horse
that, if we're honest, none of us actually knew existed

but it seemed worth it just to get you into the car,
to stop shouting. We mentioned it so often

you began to repeat it from your child-seat
like a mantra, and you'll never know the relief,

having arrived and not been able to see a stable,
having stalled you with an ice-cream which you wore

like a glove as it melted over your hand,
of finding the woman who showed us where

the horse rides took place, where you waited
so quietly in line, where I stood and watched

as you approached the man with a five pound note
scrunched up in your tiny hand. You spent

thr rest of the day repeating the words "too little"
like a radio breaking bad news every hour on the hour.

We took you down to the lake and watched
you throw stones at the water, watched clouds fall apart

and mend as rowing boats left the harbour and you
sat still, refusing to join another queue.

by Tom WEIR (Commended), in "NATIONAL POETRY COMPETITION", Winners' Anthology 2014, presented by The Poetry Society 2014

(photo taken from Internet; edited by Armando TABORDA)

, buonacoppi, goandgo, .t.a.o.n. and 5 other people have particularly liked this photo


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 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Ulrich John!
9 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Je te remercie le fave, René Boes!
9 years ago.
 Eliana Verona
Eliana Verona
Belíssima imagem...eu cresci cavalgando pelos campos, livre como o vento!!!
Um beijo, querido amigo ♥♥♥
9 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Eliana Verona
...e de certeza que também fizeste ricochetes com pedras no lago...ou no mar!!!

Um beijo a cavalgar para ti, Eliana!
9 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Je te remercie le fave, Agatha Savoie!
9 years ago.
 beverley
beverley
I simply adore this picture ..... nothing more to add ... its delightful in so many ways ;-)
9 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to beverley
...so, if there is "nothing more to add"...I didn't know your feeling on the poem, Bev! :)
9 years ago.
beverley has replied to Armando Taborda club
the poem is interesting in its own right of course .... but the picture
transported me in many ways in my memories of horse riding ... and
I allowed them to dominate my thoughts ;-)
9 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to beverley
many thanks for details, horse rider Bev :)
9 years ago.
 beverley
beverley
the great escape in our imagination

ADMIRED in ART 4U
9 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to beverley
That's fair, Bev! Thanks!
9 years ago.
 .t.a.o.n.
.t.a.o.n.
beautifully done, armando !
9 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to .t.a.o.n.
Thanks much Robert!
9 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, goandgo!
9 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, buonacoppi!
9 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Lorenzo Salmonson!
9 years ago.

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