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THE EMPTINESS

THE EMPTINESS
When the house was taken down
the air that for so long
had been parcelled into rooms
drifted into the day and was lost there.

There were no windows anymore
for the sunlight to fall through,
or landings to rest on, and it fell now
in long beams on the bare ground.

In time the last of brick dust
was carried off by the wind
and there was only the emptiness,
something like the emptiness

that the horse-drawn wagons,
laden with new bricks,
with window frames and tiles,
had first pulled up at.

by Simon RICHEY, in "THE POETRY REVIEW", Volume 105:3, Autumn 2015

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 beverley
beverley
and yet ... much interest to be seen in
colours, textures and thoughts of the past !
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to beverley
...they can be reconstructed in the future, Bev! :)
8 years ago.
 Ulrich John
Ulrich John club
That's the shabby rest of life: only ruins !
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Ulrich John club
We always can rebuild our lives, Ulrich!
8 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Lorenzo Salmonson!
8 years ago.
 Steve Bucknell
Steve Bucknell club
Do you know the majestic opening lines of James Fenton's "A German Requiem", Armando?

It is not what they built. It is what they knocked down.
It is not the houses. It is the spaces in between the houses.
It is not the streets that exist. It is the streets that no longer exist.
It is not your memories which haunt you.
It is not what you have written down.
It is what you have forgotten, what you must forget.
What you must go on forgetting all your life.
And with any luck oblivion should discover a ritual.
You will find out that you are not alone in the enterprise.
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Steve Bucknell club
Yes, Steve! And also the closing stanzas of this majestic poem.

"Even the enquirer is charmed.
He forgets to pursue the point.
It is not what he wants to know.
It is what he wants not to know.
It is not what they say.
It is what they do not say."
8 years ago.
Steve Bucknell club has replied to Armando Taborda club
Exactly. We're on the same page.
8 years ago.
 Christel Ehretsmann
Christel Ehretsmann club
an emptiness full of garbage
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Christel Ehretsmann club
Nowadays all garbage can be recycled, Christel! :)
8 years ago.
 Steve Bucknell
Steve Bucknell club
Garbage the new Daffodils.
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Steve Bucknell club
Is it poetry?
8 years ago.
 'ºLº'
'ºLº'
Your photograph makes me think of the Nepal earthquake, the pictures of which in the News, were heartwrenching ..
A shell of a home, still full of memories of people's laughter and tears, precious moments of bliss and sadness, life.. tatooed on the bricks, clinging foolishly on the blue tatters on the shattered wall ..
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to 'ºLº'
...we can do nothing against the nature strength...even prevention is only a token palliative...
8 years ago. Edited 8 years ago.
 .t.a.o.n.
.t.a.o.n.
i see a lot of things !
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to .t.a.o.n.
Despite the dust, Robert?
8 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, goandgo!
8 years ago.

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