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Rainy day

Rainy day
Today
it's impossible to stop the rehearsal of the "Clouds Symphony Orchestra"
conducted by a filthy and naked
director / tree
with open arms against the horizon.

Originated by blasts of wind
some dissonances are listen
but the audience behaviour
remains cool
and silent.

Today's sounds rain upon our heads
while the orchestra / tempest
pushed by the wind
looks for another destiny.

///

Hoje
é impossível parar o ensaio da "Orquestra Sinfónica das Nuvens"
dirigida por um maestro / árvore
esquálido e nu
de braços abertos contra o horizonte.

Ouvem-se algumas dissonâncias
provocadas por rajadas de vento
mas o comportamento do auditório
mantém-se calmo
e silencioso.

Hoje chovem sons
sobre nossas cabeças
enquanto a orquestra / tempestade
empurrada pelo vento
procura um novo destino.

by Armando TABORDA, in "PALAVRAS QUE AS MARÉS APAGAM", Edição Escola de Mar, 2014

(1st edition, 2008; 2nd edition, 2016; 3rd edition, 2018)
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Jean-louis Thiaudiere, buonacoppi, goandgo, and 18 other people have particularly liked this photo


34 comments - The latest ones
 Shi*
Shi*
Played molto allegro no doubt, Armando!

Good to see that you used the rainy day so beautifully as inspiration though!
16 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Shi*
One molto intenso thanks to you, Dave!
16 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Merci par votre faves, Pierrick et Lio. D!
16 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Je te remercie le fave, "Le vert des rivières"!
16 years ago.
 Agatha Savoie
Agatha Savoie
J'aime beaucoup le N et B et aussi beaucoup les arbres ...
Aussi, je ne peux qu'aimer cette belle photo Armando !!
16 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Agatha Savoie
Enchanté avec ton commentaire, Agatha! Merci bien aussi par le fave!
16 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks very much for your fave, Laurenz!
16 years ago.
 Christel Ehretsmann
Christel Ehretsmann club
like a black and dainty sun
15 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Christel Ehretsmann club
...yes, Christel..."the audience remains cool and silent" before "a black and dainty sun"...thanks for your acute comment...
15 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Eugene Shevchenko!
11 years ago.
 J.Garcia
J.Garcia club
Muito belo poema e imagem
Ramos erguidos para a luz que é ténue!
8 years ago. Edited 8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to J.Garcia club
Obrigado, Judite!

Ouves a música?
8 years ago.
J.Garcia club has replied to Armando Taborda club
Sim!!, Armando

Beijo!
8 years ago. Edited 8 years ago.
 cammino
cammino club
It´s a nice rainy day!
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to cammino club
Thanks much, cammino!
8 years ago.
 Ulrich John
Ulrich John club
Bonne semaine from sunny (!) Frankfurt !
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Ulrich John club
So, take profite of it, Ulrich! :)
8 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Je te remercie le fave, Thérèse!
8 years ago.
 Malik Raoulda
Malik Raoulda club
D'une extrême beauté ..!
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Malik Raoulda club
Merci du coeur, Malik!
8 years ago.
 Helena Ferreira
Helena Ferreira
Magnífica composição!
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Helena Ferreira
Muito obrigado, Helena!
8 years ago.
 beverley
beverley
it does seem the trees are waving their arms about asking it to stop ... but
it does not work I know I've tried ;-)
8 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to beverley
...you know, the orchestra / tempest, pushed by the wind, always look for another destiny, Bev :)
8 years ago.
 beverley
beverley
yes indeed and it's arrived here this morning, thanks ;-)
8 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, .t.a.o.n.!
8 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Lorenzo Salmonson!
8 years ago.
 J.Garcia
J.Garcia club
É sempre um prazer reler belos poemas, Armando
5 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to J.Garcia club
Inebriado de música, agradeço-te, Judite!
5 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, goandgo!
5 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, buonacoppi!
5 years ago.
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Merci pour le fave, Jean-louis Thiaudiere!
4 years ago.

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