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Haiku

posted by A Shi*
Posted on Friday November 9, 2007 at 08:49. 710 visits. ( permalink )
A thought:
For those not familiar with the form,
a good place to start:

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

:)

12 Replies

revcodes says:
Admirable group
contributing is joyful
I am so pleased
Posted 2 years ago. ( permalink / translate )
revcodes edited this reply 2 years ago.
A Shi* pro replies:
Shared joy of beauty
Inside on cold winter nights
Friends tell fireside tales

... and it is always a pleasure to hear from you Kathy!
Posted 2 years ago. ( permalink )
Stiletto pro says:
Thank you for sharing Shi* :-)

--
Coming from a group home page (?)
Posted 2 years ago. ( permalink )
A Shi* pro replies:
They sat together and laughed
New friends becoming old friends
Autumn moon.
Posted 2 years ago. ( permalink )
Stiletto pro replies:
Posted 2 years ago. ( permalink )
Lodchjo says:
her perfect body
models it's contours into
her white summer dress.

(--> i'm looking for a girl to fit the haiku :P )
Posted 2 years ago. ( permalink )
mad.melon replies:
Stiletto is perfect :)) don't look any further :D

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Seen in a group discussion (?)
Posted 2 years ago. ( permalink )
A Shi* pro replies:
yes
Posted 2 years ago. ( permalink )
Terurcxjo Gynoid says:
Кистью пишу пустоту,
Ветер колышет камыш.
Взгляну своей смерти в лицо.

Сердце, волнуясь, стучит,
Тихо кружит тонкий лист.
Сколько же страха во мне?

Сжали последнюю рожь,
Два журавля в небесах.
Зеркала нету честней.

Радость приходит ко мне,
Сакуру вишней зовут.
Все еще веришь в любовь?

На поле курю анашу,
Пачкает кровь кимоно.
Я все сказал, что хотел.

Ударил в бубен монах,
Демон солнце сожрал.
Бог живет в каждом из нас.

На запад я помолюсь,
Прыгнула в воду лягушка.
Я над собой посмеюсь.

К солнцу поднялся клинок,
Больно - не стану кричать.
Он бы ее полюбил.

;-))
Posted 20 months ago. ( permalink )
A Shi* pro replies:
Looks like a job for a Russian translator ... I will see what I can do! :)
Posted 20 months ago. ( permalink )
A Shi* pro replies:
The best I can do for now:

Brush I write emptiness,
Wind колышет a cane.
I shall look the death to face.

Heart, worrying, knocks,
Silently turns a thin leaf.
How many fear in me?

Have compressed last rye,
Two cranes in heavens.
Mirrors are not present more fairly.

The pleasure comes to me,
Oriental cherry a cherry call.
Still you trust in love?

On a floor I smoke hemp,
Spoils blood of a kimono.
I all have told, that wanted.

The monk has struck in бубен,
The demon has gobbled up the sun.
The god lives in each of us.

On the West I shall pray,
The frog has jumped in water.
I above myself shall be dared.

To the sun has risen клинок,
Painfully - I shall not begin to shout.
It would grow fond of it.
Posted 20 months ago. ( permalink )
Margita says:
On the willage road
I can see all cloudfull sky -
It's looking from puddles.

Shadow of flower
On the cheek of a baby.
Sunday and silence.
Posted 7 months ago. ( permalink )

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