Marinkel * Published on December 4, 2007
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haiku

Tuesday December 4, 2007 at 06:14AM

i stole myself away from you

without waking your eyelids

leaving the scent of orange blossoms

on your fingertips

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Shi*pro says:
the joy of a good haiku is the immediate sensory hit it gives. This is lovely. A treasure.
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink )
Marinkel * replies:
thank you! it may be my first ever haiku...
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink )
Shi*pro replies:
... but not the last I hope, you have the touch! these words convey so much with elegant economy!
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink )
Mona Lisa says:
ach, es gehört zu dem bild. :-)
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink / translate )
Marinkel * replies:
es ist eine andere geschichte. aber dann gehört ja doch alles irgendwie zusammen.. :)
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink / translate )
MacKeypro says:
so lovely :-) love the scent of orange blossoms.
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink )
Marinkel * replies:
it's one of the most potent and luxurious... :)
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink )
Rumple says:
eine beere fiel ins wasser
noch im sinken
strahlte ihre schönheit
silberglänzend durch die wellen

(mein liebstes haiku)
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink / translate )
Marinkel * replies:
sinken. ist ein schönes gefühl... :)
Posted 23 months ago. ( permalink / translate )

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