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Venanta verdestaĵo
--laŭ ĉinesko Fengrusong (Vento inter Pinoj)

estaĵo en skulpturo
kontraŭ dommuro
grimpantoj ĉirkaresas-
Ne ploru
nia turo
ni dancas adore
laŭ via konturo

vivanta, verda ŝnuro
verda tinkturo
elverŝas premimpresojn
al sur la blanka puro
dum ili amkantas-
vi estas nurnuro

Fengrusong havas silaban aranĝon laŭ: 7,5,734,66 / 7,5,77,66
rimaranĝon: a,a,xxa,xa / a,a,xa,xa (x=senrima) desegnaĵo de Eder Benedetti

Eventual Verdant Being

A being in statuette
against parapet
climbers tendrilly caress-
please don't cry
our minaret
we dance adoringly
along your silhouette

A living green plaited net
green dye foliate
pour out pressing impressions
on whiteness immaculate
while they sing lovingly-
you're something separate

Ĉineske 9: http://www.ipernity.com/doc/cindio/5586623/in/album/141538

Red River
--in the tradition of Ci, form Manjianghong (River Fully Red)

Clay full I am
rich and red
through this their clay
I filter,
leach tribal tongues
and wetly play
my liquid tongue delivers
discourse from an ancient day
inscribe in
liquid pottery
the old way

Then southward
I survey
strong Texas
I decay
the clay of cowboys
I will convey
redly, rushing, to the Gulf
I pause at the port to weigh
my peoples
then mix world's water
in my spray

Manjianghong has two stanzas, of syllable arrangement: 434,344,77,353 / 33,33,54,77,353
and rhyme arrangement: xxa,xxa,xa,xxa / xa,xa,xa,xa,xxa