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traces

Saturday March 29, 2008 at 10:03PM

i stumbled and hurt myself
was staggering without falling

i left traces - some people found
some answered – and left again

you found them too … without knowing
and you touched me

i answered - you got scared …

we learned .. we still do

we are leaving traces together
on , around and in each other

12 Comments / add your comment?

'SouthPaw' says:
Excellent. How true these words are.
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
mo **pro replies:
i don't know if they are true ...
they are what i'm feeling - glad these
words are appealing to you
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
MacKeypro replies:
i agree with SouthPaw. how true :-) i can relate.
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
mo **pro replies:
i'm very glad you can
and i somehow knew you would ..
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
Carla Kronenberg says:
truth to be found in poems is better than learning by mistakes.
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
mo **pro replies:
both ways are good if they lead you further
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
Great says:
Very beautiful ! This is what it's all about !
Traces I'm thinking of
Maybe traces of love
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
mo **pro replies:
i love to follow traces
...
and we are all leaving traces behind ..

best when they are traces of love
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
franck says:
*jr*
but first , i follow the traces , and i savoure to find you now ...
*oO** te iubesc**
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
mo **pro replies:
did you find me , dear ;)
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
franck says:
your poetic words remind me this beautiful song that i love
i already send to you ...
www.ipernity.com/doc/fra/972959
Still leave traces behind , on, inside us, .. And let the traces of future memories guide us on the path we'll make together.
*oO** te iubesc**
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )
mo **pro replies:
mo-teach : " your poetic words remind me OF this beautiful song
that i love . i already senT it to you "

who's leaving those traces behind , on , inside us ... toi , moi , nous deux .. ensemble ?
j'adore ces mo-ts : let the traces of future memories guide us on the path we'll make together ..
un autre rêve nous ont ensemble - oui , j'aimerai faire ça ; pour toi , pour moi , pour nous -
ensemble . je gardes notres traces ... mon trèsor

**o°° gam ani , AOO°
Posted 21 months ago. ( permalink )

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