somewhere

.. don't get scared. i'm fine

i'm glad you're fine... =0)

.... get drifted and tell me mo-re.
can you imagine this feeling ?

Sometimes while swimming I close my eyes and just drift, down... but it's always a sadness I feel.

I too am glad that you're fine. :)
I've sought this feeling both when happy and sad.

and did you succeed to reach it ? floating and losing oneself ?

The Girl on the Bridge ... do you know the film by Patrice Leconte? This reminds me of that. One of my favourite films. The bridge is used similarly as a metaphor there too.Sometimes we just have to dive in.

i'm not sure if i know that movie . can you tell me a brief description ? and who's playing ?
maybe you'll find a link :)

...over the rainbow.....

une autre enigme - ou est il , l'arc en ciel ?
en plus comment est'ce qu'on peut se promener la ?
tu sais ?

: ) beautiful poetry

glad you like it mel. very glad !
i was worried about people misunderstanding
these lines . well now most people tell me they're
glad i'm fine and don't care about the poem at all ...
grrr !
oh and psss - you faved those bw pics but no
words to tell me a lill' about what and why you like ..
am i bad ? have a nice weekend :)

baaaad! ;P

hey lill' boy ! why are you screaming around , blaming me ? any problem ? :)
calm down.. we can talk about it , ok ?

i agree, beautiful poem :-)

glad you like it mac . i still hope more people
will get on the flow too ...

always a mo-poète and mo-re

always .. ? .. peut-être encore et encore
quelque fois un peu moin
quelque fois un peu plus

**o°°

i also like the poem.... some of us really believed you are going to do sth... so you see how strong it act on emotion, and how easy it''s to imagine...to get it right...

tuto bene rafaln . i was just taken over by feelings i couldn't express
in a different way . sometimes i really think getting dissolved and
being a tiny part of the flow must be great . in a way we already are,
still we see ourselves as too important...
gosh, it's hard to explain - but maybe you understand already –

hmm... i'm not sure i understand, but i think so. do you mean that some kind of feeling when we feel like a part of sth big, not thinking about us as about individual?? when you really don't think what you do but do and participate in what's going around??
now, aren't my thoughts too complicated??

no.. not at all ! your thoughts are exactly what i have in mind !
it's losing oneself still not giving up ones own identity . being entangled
with ones environment . am i now too complicated ? :)

it seems to me that saying i understand you isn't very exaggerated ;)
i have had experienced that feeling once... and ohhh....

seems like we're " brothers " in mind ... i'd love to know mo-re about this experience you made...
( if i'm not being to indiscrete )

Beau texte, très sensible (même s'il est difficile de juger de poésie dans une autre langue)
et très belle photo aussi. Mais les deux ensemble, j'ai des doutes: le sentiment de dissolution s'oppose à la fermeté métallique du pont. Question de sensibilité personnelle, je crois.

A moins que la dissolution ne passe par le rythme de la structure métallique, justement.
D'où ma proposition :-)

merci pour ta visite et tes mots ... peut-être je mettrai une autre image , je sais pas.
pour moi il y a assez d'espace sous ce pont pour flotter dans l'eau et avoir ce sentiment
de dissolution .